Comments on: Skimble-Skamble kinda night. http://aspiringsomething.wordpress.com/2009/06/30/skimble-skamble-kinda-night/ Romantic Dreamer fancies himself an artist. Mon, 09 Nov 2009 19:27:06 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: edhelwen1 http://aspiringsomething.wordpress.com/2009/06/30/skimble-skamble-kinda-night/#comment-157 edhelwen1 Tue, 30 Jun 2009 19:19:07 +0000 http://aspiringsomething.wordpress.com/?p=293#comment-157 Yes, that makes much more sense. :D Thank you! :D Yes, that makes much more sense. :D Thank you! :D

]]> By: Éric http://aspiringsomething.wordpress.com/2009/06/30/skimble-skamble-kinda-night/#comment-156 Éric Tue, 30 Jun 2009 19:05:14 +0000 http://aspiringsomething.wordpress.com/?p=293#comment-156 The 1st is the present... then 2,3,4,5 are the past... then 6 brings us back to the present and moves on. I made a few minor changes I hope the extra spacing and the change makes it less confusing. The 1st is the present… then 2,3,4,5 are the past… then 6 brings us back to the present and moves on. I made a few minor changes I hope the extra spacing and the change makes it less confusing.

]]> By: edhelwen1 http://aspiringsomething.wordpress.com/2009/06/30/skimble-skamble-kinda-night/#comment-154 edhelwen1 Tue, 30 Jun 2009 18:49:04 +0000 http://aspiringsomething.wordpress.com/?p=293#comment-154 I figured out one thing that bothered me - the beginning is supposed to be her thinking back on what happened during the night, right? But it doesn't seem to find a place to fit in at the ending, where it is chronologically supposed to be. Am I right? Does that make sense? I figured out one thing that bothered me – the beginning is supposed to be her thinking back on what happened during the night, right? But it doesn’t seem to find a place to fit in at the ending, where it is chronologically supposed to be. Am I right? Does that make sense?

]]> By: Jen http://aspiringsomething.wordpress.com/2009/06/30/skimble-skamble-kinda-night/#comment-153 Jen Tue, 30 Jun 2009 17:01:29 +0000 http://aspiringsomething.wordpress.com/?p=293#comment-153 Whoa. This was crazy. I enjoyed the story, but it needs to be cleaned up a bit. Punctuation, spelling, grammar. I'd love to see that. I really like the the line "everything seemed a little bendy". :P Adorable. :D Whoa. This was crazy. I enjoyed the story, but it needs to be cleaned up a bit. Punctuation, spelling, grammar. I’d love to see that.

I really like the the line “everything seemed a little bendy”. :P Adorable. :D

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